YOU SAID:
Against mine, his body lay soft like a warm star.
INTO JAPANESE
私に対して、彼の体は暖かい星のように柔らかく横たわっていました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Against me, his body lay softly like a warm star.
INTO JAPANESE
私に対して、彼の体は暖かい星のように柔らかく横たわっていました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Against me, his body lay softly like a warm star.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.