YOU SAID:

And so i went up to the shopkeeper and said, hey you- dude! give me a piece of gum!

INTO JAPANESE

それで私は店主のところに行って言った、「おいおい！ガムをください！

BACK INTO ENGLISH

So I went to the shopkeeper and said, "Hey! Give me some gum!

INTO JAPANESE

それで店主のところに行って「ねぇ！ガムをくれ！

BACK INTO ENGLISH

So I went to the shopkeeper and said, "Hey! Give me some gum!