YOU SAID:
Are all of your ideas in a place that makes sense given your argument? Are your sentences within each paragraph arranged in a clear order?
INTO JAPANESE
あなたのアイデアは、あなたの議論を考えれば理にかなっていますか？各段落内の文章は明確な順序で並べられていますか？
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Does your idea make sense if you consider your argument? Are the sentences in each paragraph lined up in a clear order?
INTO JAPANESE
あなたの議論を考えればあなたの考えは理にかなっていますか？各段落の文章は明確な順序で並べられていますか？
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Does your idea make sense if you consider your argument? Are the sentences in each paragraph lined up in a clear order?
Come on, you can do better than that.
