YOU SAID:
"Are you gonna let me in? Hello? Hello?"
INTO JAPANESE
「入れてくれる?こんにちは?こんにちは?」
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"Can you let me in? Hello? Hello?"
INTO JAPANESE
「入れてもらえますか?こんにちは?こんにちは?」
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"Can you let me in? Hello? Hello?"
That didn't even make that much sense in English.