YOU SAID:

as soon as she sees me she turns away.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女が私を見るとすぐ彼女は背を向ける。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

As soon as she looks at me she turns her back.

INTO JAPANESE

彼女が私を見るとすぐに彼女は背を向けます。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

As soon as she looks at me she turns her back.