YOU SAID:

But now the rains weep o’er his hall, with no one there to hear.

INTO JAPANESE

しかし、今や雨は彼のホールから泣いています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

But now the rain is crying from his hall.

INTO JAPANESE

しかし今、雨が彼の館から泣いています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

But now, the rain is crying from his house.

INTO JAPANESE

しかし今、彼の家から雨が泣いています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Rain is crying from his house now.

INTO JAPANESE

今雨が彼の家から泣いています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Rain is crying from his house now.