YOU SAID:

even though the sound of it is something quite atrocious, if you say it loud enough you'll always sound precocious

INTO JAPANESE

たとえそれの音がかなり残酷なものであっても、あなたがそれを十分に大声で言うならば、あなたはいつも早熟に聞こえます

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Even if the sound of it is quite cruel, if you say it loud enough, you always sound precocious

INTO JAPANESE

たとえそれの音がかなり残酷であっても、あなたがそれを十分に大声で言うと、あなたはいつも早熟に聞こえます

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Even if the sound of it is quite cruel, if you say it loud enough, you always sound precocious