YOU SAID:

first of all what makes you think you can comment on my translations?

INTO JAPANESE

まず第一に、あなたが私の翻訳にコメントできると思うのは何ですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

First of all, what do you think you can comment on my translation?

INTO JAPANESE

まず第一に、私の翻訳についてコメントできると思いますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

First of all, can you comment on my translation?

INTO JAPANESE

まず第一に、私の翻訳についてコメントしてもらえますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

First of all, can you comment on my translation?