YOU SAID:

for the ramparts watched were so gallantly gleaming

INTO JAPANESE

見ていた城壁がとても凛々しく輝いていたから

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The castle walls I was looking at were shining so dignifiedly.

INTO JAPANESE

見ていた城壁はとても凛々しく輝いていました。

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The castle walls I was looking at were shining with great dignity.

INTO JAPANESE

見ていた城壁は凛々しく輝いていた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The castle walls I was looking at were shining with dignity.

INTO JAPANESE

見ていた城壁は凛々しく輝いていた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The castle walls I was looking at were shining with dignity.