YOU SAID:

giving him a lot of land and slaves making him a jerck

INTO JAPANESE

彼にたくさんの土地と奴隷を与えて彼をぐいと動かしました

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Gave him a lot of land and slaves and shook him

INTO JAPANESE

彼にたくさんの土地と奴隷を与え、彼を揺さぶった

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Gave him a lot of land and slaves and shook him