YOU SAID:

happily wondering, night after night, is this how it works, am I doing it right?

INTO JAPANESE

うれしいことに、夜も夜も、こういう仕組みになっているのかしら、私は正しいのかしら？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Happily, this is how it works at night and at night. Am I right?

INTO JAPANESE

うれしいことに、これは夜間と夜間の仕組みです。私は正しいですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Happily, this is how it works at night and at night. Am I right?