YOU SAID:

Hark, what light that doth fall upon my face, making me darker than I am now?

INTO JAPANESE

Hark、その光が私の顔に当たると、私が今よりも暗くなります。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hark, that light hits my face, I will be darker than it is now.

INTO JAPANESE

Hark、その光が私の顔に当たった、私は今より暗くなるでしょう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hark, that light hit my face, I will be darker now.

INTO JAPANESE

Hark、その光が私の顔に当たった、私は今暗くなるでしょう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hark, that light hit my face, I will be dark right now.

INTO JAPANESE

Hark、その光が私の顔に当たった、私は今暗くなるでしょう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hark, that light hit my face, I will be dark right now.