YOU SAID:
He found her translation of the piece breathtaking
INTO JAPANESE
彼は、彼女の作品の翻訳が息をのむように感じた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
he felt that the translation of her work was breathtaking
INTO JAPANESE
彼は、彼女の作品の翻訳が息をのむように感じた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
he felt that the translation of her work was breathtaking
That didn't even make that much sense in English.