YOU SAID:

he walks across the lawn and spots a lady she holds up a coconut proudly saying it is hers

INTO JAPANESE

彼は芝生を横切って歩き、彼女が誇らしげにココナッツを持っている女性を見つけました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

He walked across the lawn and found a woman she proudly had a coconut.

INTO JAPANESE

彼は芝生を横切って歩いて、彼女が誇らしげにココナッツを持っている女性を見つけました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

He walked across the lawn and found a woman she proudly had a coconut.