YOU SAID:

"Hello?" answered a voice that was deep and stuffy, like the man on the other end had just been torn from sleep.

INTO JAPANESE

「こんにちは」は、もう一方の端の男がちょうど睡眠から引き裂かれたように、深くて息苦しい声に答えました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

"Hello," responded to a deep, stifling voice, just as the man at the other end had just been torn from sleep.

INTO JAPANESE

「こんにちは」は、もう一方の端の男がちょうど睡眠から引き裂かれたように、深い、息苦しい声に応答しました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

"Hello," responded to a deep, stifling voice, just as the man at the other end had just been torn from sleep.