YOU SAID:
"Hello!" he called. "Is anybody there?"
INTO JAPANESE
"こんにちは!"彼は呼ばれた。 "だれかいますか?"
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"Hello!" He was called. "Is anyone there?"
INTO JAPANESE
"こんにちは!"彼は呼ばれた。 "誰かいませんか?"
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"Hello!" He was called. "Is anyone there?"
That didn't even make that much sense in English.