YOU SAID:

His fingers shook as he aimed. He inhaled, aware that it could be his last breath.

INTO JAPANESE

狙いを定めたとき、彼の指は震えた。彼は息を吸いながら、これが最後の息になるかもしれないと悟った。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

His fingers trembled as he took aim. As he took a breath, he realized that this might be his last breath.

INTO JAPANESE

狙いを定めると指が震えた。息を吸いながら、これが最後の息かもしれないと悟った。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My fingers trembled as I took aim. As I took a deep breath, I realized that this might be my last breath.

INTO JAPANESE

狙いを定めると指が震えた。深呼吸をしたとき、これが最後の呼吸かもしれないと気づきました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My fingers trembled as I took aim. As I took a deep breath, I realized that this might be my last breath.