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His very long eyelashes hanging just below his shoulders no longer delineated his emerald green eyes that he is very ill.
INTO JAPANESE
彼の肩のすぐ下にぶら下がっている彼の非常に長いまつげは、もはや彼が非常に病気であるという彼のエメラルドグリーンの目の輪郭を描きませんでした。
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His very long eyelash hanging just below his shoulder no longer outlined his emerald green eye that he was very ill.
INTO JAPANESE
彼の肩の真下にぶら下がっている彼の非常に長いまつげは、もはや彼が非常に病気であるという彼のエメラルドグリーンの目の輪郭を描いた。
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His very long eyelash hanging just below his shoulders delineated his emerald green eyes that he was no longer very ill.
INTO JAPANESE
彼の肩のすぐ下にぶら下がっている彼の非常に長いまつげは、彼がもはや非常に病気ではなかったことを彼のエメラルドグリーンの目の輪郭を描いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
His very long eyelash hanging just below his shoulder outlined his emerald green eyes that he was no longer very ill.
INTO JAPANESE
彼の肩の真下にぶら下がっている彼の非常に長いまつげは、彼がもはや非常に病気ではなかったことを彼のエメラルドグリーンの目の輪郭を描いた。
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His very long eyelash hanging just below his shoulder outlined his emerald green eyes that he was no longer very ill.
Come on, you can do better than that.