YOU SAID:

I felt the heat of my mother’s eyes scorching the back of my neck as I stepped onto the bus and turned to the aisle.

INTO JAPANESE

バスに乗って通路に向かうと、母の目の熱が首の後ろを焦がすのを感じました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I got on the bus and headed for the aisle, I felt the heat of my mother's eyes scorching behind my neck.

INTO JAPANESE

バスに乗って通路に向かうと、母の目の熱が首の後ろで焦げているのを感じました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

As I got on the bus and headed for the aisle, I felt the heat of my mother's eyes scorched behind my neck.

INTO JAPANESE

バスに乗って通路に向かうと、母の目の熱が首の後ろで焦げているのを感じました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

As I got on the bus and headed for the aisle, I felt the heat of my mother's eyes scorched behind my neck.