YOU SAID:

I hate going to parties, they are so loud and it makes me nervous.

INTO JAPANESE

パーティーは大嫌いで、声が大きくて緊張します。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I hate parties and get nervous because I'm loud.

INTO JAPANESE

私はパーティーが嫌いで、声が大きいので緊張します。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I hate parties and get nervous because I'm loud.