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i hate it when velociraptors pee on my picnic

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velociraptorsが私のピクニックにおしっこをするとき私はそれが嫌い

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I hate it when velociraptors pee on my picnic

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velociraptorsが私のピクニックにおしっこをするとき、私はそれを憎む

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I hate it when velociraptors pee on my picnic