YOU SAID:

I have to catch a train at 8:30am tomorrow. Can we send the luggage tonight?

INTO JAPANESE

明日は午前8時半の電車に乗らなければなりません。今夜荷物を送ることはできますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I have to catch the 8:30am train tomorrow. Can you send my package tonight?

INTO JAPANESE

明日は午前8時半の電車に乗らなければなりません。今夜荷物を送っていただけますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I have to catch the 8:30am train tomorrow. Could you send my luggage tonight?

INTO JAPANESE

明日は午前8時半の電車に乗らなければなりません。今夜荷物を送っていただけますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I have to catch the 8:30am train tomorrow. Could you send my luggage tonight?