YOU SAID:
I like to eat noodles in the evening, on my balcony, listening to the sound of life passing by.
INTO JAPANESE
夕方、バルコニーで、通り過ぎる生活の音を聞きながら、麺類を食べるのが好きです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I like eating noodles on my balcony in the evening, listening to the sounds of life passing by.
INTO JAPANESE
私は夕方にバルコニーで麺を食べながら、通り過ぎる生活の音を聞くのが好きです.
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I like to listen to the sounds of life passing by while eating noodles on the balcony in the evening.
INTO JAPANESE
夕方、バルコニーで麺を食べながら、通り過ぎる生活の音を聞くのが好きです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I like to listen to the sounds of life passing by while eating noodles on the balcony in the evening.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.