YOU SAID:

I love when he wraps his strong hands round my delicate neck and chokes me into heavenly submission.

INTO JAPANESE

私は彼の強い手を繊細な首に巻きつけて、私を天の服従に泣かせます。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I wrap his strong hand around delicate neck and make me cry in heavenly submission.

INTO JAPANESE

私は繊細な首の周りに彼の強い手を包み、天の服従で私を泣かせます。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I wrap his strong hand around delicate neck and make me cry in heavenly submission.