YOU SAID:

I'm taking this horse by the reins making redcoats redder with bloodstains!

INTO JAPANESE

私はこの馬を血の染みで赤みを帯びた手綱で取っています！

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I am taking this horse with a red stain with blood stain!

INTO JAPANESE

私はこの馬を血の染みで赤い染みで取っています！

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I am taking this horse with a red stain with blood stain!