YOU SAID:

I tried to look to the stars, but their gaze returned to me in a way that hurt.

INTO JAPANESE

星に目を向けようとしたが、その視線は痛いほどに私に戻ってきた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I tried to look at the stars, but their gaze came painfully back to me.

INTO JAPANESE

星を見ようとしたが、その視線が痛いほど私に返ってきた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I tried to look at the stars, but their gaze returned to me painfully.

INTO JAPANESE

星を見ようとしたが、その視線は痛々しいほど私に返ってきた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I tried to look at the stars, but their gaze was painfully returned to me.

INTO JAPANESE

星を見ようとしたが、その視線は痛々しいほど私に返された。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I tried to look at the stars, but their gaze was painfully returned to me.