YOU SAID:

I went up to Rob at the store and asked him for the money Bill gave him.

INTO JAPANESE

私は店でロブに上がり、ビルが彼にくれたお金を彼に頼んだ。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I went up to Rob at the store and asked him for the money Bill had give him.

INTO JAPANESE

私は店でロブに上がり、ビルが彼に与えたお金を彼に尋ねました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I went up to Rob at the store and asked him for the money Bill gave him.

INTO JAPANESE

私は店でロブに上がり、ビルが彼にくれたお金を彼に頼んだ。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I went up to Rob at the store and asked him for the money Bill had give him.

INTO JAPANESE

私は店でロブに上がり、ビルが彼に与えたお金を彼に尋ねました。