YOU SAID:

Im so damaged, I hold my breath and freeze eh

INTO JAPANESE

私はとても損傷したので、私は息を止めて凍らせる

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I was so damaged that I hold my breath and freeze

INTO JAPANESE

私はとてもダメージを受けたので、息を止めて凍りついた

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I was so damaged that I held my breath and froze.

INTO JAPANESE

私はとてもダメージを受けたので、息を止めて凍りついた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I was so damaged that I held my breath and froze.