YOU SAID:

It's a shame she won't live - but then again, who does?

INTO JAPANESE

彼女はライブはありません - は残念だが、再度、誰ですか。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Sorry she is not live, but who is again?

INTO JAPANESE

すみません、彼女は生きていませんが、もう誰ですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I'm sorry, she is not alive, but who are you already?

INTO JAPANESE

すみません、彼女は生きていませんが、あなたは誰ですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I'm sorry, she is not alive, who are you?

INTO JAPANESE

すみません、彼女は生きていません、あなたは誰ですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I'm sorry, she is not alive, who are you?