YOU SAID:

It is good but there are some changes that need to be made to the translation:

INTO JAPANESE

それはいいのですが、翻訳に加える必要があるいくつかの変更があります：

BACK INTO ENGLISH

That's fine, but there are some changes that need to be made to the translation:

INTO JAPANESE

それでも問題ありませんが、翻訳にはいくつかの変更が必要です。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

That's fine, but translation requires some changes.

INTO JAPANESE

それでいいのですが、翻訳にはいくつかの変更が必要です。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

That's fine, but translation requires some changes.