YOU SAID:
It was the first time I saw her in the rain.
INTO JAPANESE
雨の中で彼女を見たのは初めてだった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It was the first time I had seen her in the rain.
INTO JAPANESE
雨の中で彼女を見たのは初めてだった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It was the first time I had seen her in the rain.
Come on, you can do better than that.