YOU SAID:

last week the police came by my apartment and asked if i had seen anything strange.

INTO JAPANESE

先週、警察は私のアパートに来て、私が何か奇妙なものを見たことがあるかと尋ねました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I asked there last week, the police came to my apartment, I saw something strange.

INTO JAPANESE

私は先週そこに尋ねた、警察は私のアパートに来た、私は何か奇妙なことを見た。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I asked there last week, the police came to my apartment, I saw something strange.