YOU SAID:
she asked me "son when i grow old, will you buy me a house of gold?"
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は私に「私が年を取ったら息子に金の家を買ってくれる?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She asked me, "When I get older, will you buy my son a house of money?"
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は私に「私が年を取ったら、息子にお金の家を買ってくれる?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She asked me, "When I get older, will you buy my son a house of money?"
Come on, you can do better than that.