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She started screaming when I told her it was going to end

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私はそれが終わらせるつもりだったと彼女に言ったとき、彼女は叫び始めました

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She started crying when I told her that it was going to end it

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私はそれがそれを終わらせるつもりであると彼女に言ったとき、彼女は泣き始めました

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She started to cry when I told her that it was going to end it

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私はそれがそれを終わらせるつもりであると私に言ったとき、彼女は泣き始めました

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She started to cry when I told me that it was going to end it

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私はそれがそれを終わらせるつもりであると私に言ったとき、彼女は泣き始めました

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She started to cry when I told me that it was going to end it