YOU SAID:
she was like the sun, because i was always squinting angrily at her.
INTO JAPANESE
私はいつも怒って目を細めていたので、彼女は太陽のようでした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was like the sun because I was always angry and squinting.
INTO JAPANESE
私はいつも怒って目を細めていたので、彼女は太陽のようでした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She was like the sun because I was always angry and squinting.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.