YOU SAID:

sometimes, when i would be eating soup, my father would hit me.

INTO JAPANESE

時々、私がスープを食べているとき、父が私を殴りました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Sometimes my dad hit me when I was eating soup.

INTO JAPANESE

私がスープを食べていたとき、時々父が私を殴った。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Sometimes my dad hit me when I was eating soup.