YOU SAID:

Stood round me with their dismal shade;

INTO JAPANESE

彼らの嫌な色合いで私の周りに立っていた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

They stood around me in their disgusting shades.

INTO JAPANESE

彼らは嫌な色合いで私の周りに立っていました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

They stood around me in a disgusting shade.

INTO JAPANESE

彼らは嫌な日陰で私の周りに立っていました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

They stood around me in a disgusting shade.