YOU SAID:

the bird of hermes is my name, eat my wings to make me tame.

INTO JAPANESE

エルメスの鳥は私の名前です、私の翼を食べて私を飼いならします。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hermes bird is my name, eat my wings and tame me.

INTO JAPANESE

エルメスの鳥は私の名前です、私の翼を食べて、私を飼いならします。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Hermes bird is my name, eat my wings and tame me.