YOU SAID:

the blue sun bled pillows with willows in their stab wounds

INTO JAPANESE

青い太陽が枕に柳の傷を負わせて血を流した

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The blue sun caused a willow wound on the pillow and it bled.

INTO JAPANESE

青い太陽が枕に柳の傷を作り、血を流した。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The blue sun made a willow wound in the pillow and it bled.

INTO JAPANESE

青い太陽が枕に柳の傷を作り、血を流した。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The blue sun made a willow wound in the pillow and it bled.