YOU SAID:

The first time you were able to get a job was when you were in the military

INTO JAPANESE

初めて仕事に就くことができたのは軍隊にいたときだった

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The first time I was able to get a job was when I was in the military.

INTO JAPANESE

私が初めて仕事に就くことができたのは、軍隊にいたときでした。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The first time I was able to get a job was when I was in the military.