YOU SAID:

the risen sun too bright in her losing eyes

INTO JAPANESE

昇る太陽は目を失いすぎて明るすぎる

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The rising sun is too blind and too bright

INTO JAPANESE

昇る太陽はあまりにも盲目で明るすぎる

BACK INTO ENGLISH

The rising sun is too blind and too bright