YOU SAID:

There's someone standing in the hall, near the door to the room where I stay.

INTO JAPANESE

私が泊まっている部屋のドアの近くのホールに誰かが立っています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Someone is standing in the hall near the door of the room I'm staying in.

INTO JAPANESE

私が泊まっている部屋のドア近くのホールに誰かが立っています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Someone is standing in the hall near the door of the room I'm staying in.