YOU SAID:

this is going to be good, right? it's my first time. please make it good or i will shoot you.

INTO JAPANESE

これはいいよね？それは私の初めてのことです。それを良くするか、私はあなたを撃つでしょう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This is good, is not it? That is my first time. Make it better, I will shoot you.

INTO JAPANESE

これはいいですね。それは私の初めてのことです。それを良くする、私はあなたを撃つでしょう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This sounds good. That is my first time. Make it better, I will shoot you.

INTO JAPANESE

これは良いと思う。それは私の初めてのことです。それを良くする、私はあなたを撃つでしょう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I think this is good. That is my first time. Make it better, I will shoot you.

INTO JAPANESE

私はこれが良いと思う。それは私の初めてのことです。それを良くする、私はあなたを撃つでしょう。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

I think this is good. That is my first time. Make it better, I will shoot you.