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This sounded a lot better on paper, because it made no sound on paper.

INTO JAPANESE

紙の上では音が出なかったので、これは紙の上ではずっと良く聞こえました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This sounded much better on paper, as there was no sound on paper.

INTO JAPANESE

紙の上には音がなかったので、これは紙の上ではずっと良く聞こえました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This sounded much better on paper because there was no sound on paper.

INTO JAPANESE

紙の上には音がなかったので、これは紙の上ではずっと良く聞こえました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This sounded much better on paper because there was no sound on paper.