YOU SAID:

Wanna watch my try and lift this?

INTO JAPANESE

私のこれを持ち上げる試みを見てみたいですか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Want to see my attempt at lifting this?

INTO JAPANESE

これを持ち上げる私の試みを見たいですか?

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Would you like to see my attempt at lifting this?

INTO JAPANESE

これを持ち上げる私の試みを見てみたいですか?

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Would you like to see my attempt at lifting this?