YOU SAID:

when I go to the shops I shoot two ravens then I come home and three are gone.

INTO JAPANESE

私が店に行くとき、私は2匹のカラスを撃つと、私は家に帰ってきて、3人がいなくなりました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I go to the store, I shoot two crows and I come home and three are gone.

INTO JAPANESE

店に行くと、カラスを2匹撃って家に帰ると3匹がいなくなった。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I went to the store, I shot two crows and went home and three were gone.

INTO JAPANESE

店に行くと、カラスを2匹撃って家に帰り、3匹がいなくなりました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I went to the store, I shot two crows and went home, and three were gone.

INTO JAPANESE

店に行くと、カラスを2匹撃って家に帰り、3匹はいなくなりました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I went to the store, I shot two crows and went home, and the three were gone.

INTO JAPANESE

店に行くと、カラスを2匹撃って家に帰り、3匹はいなくなりました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I went to the store, I shot two crows and went home, and the three were gone.