YOU SAID:

while dying close you're eyes

INTO JAPANESE

すぐに死にかけている間目をしています。

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While dying soon has eyes.

INTO JAPANESE

一方、目にはすぐに死にます。

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On the other hand, eyes dies immediately.

INTO JAPANESE

その一方で、すぐにダイスを目します。

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On the other hand, eyes dies immediately.