YOU SAID:

Will you pick me up after high school ends for the day

INTO JAPANESE

その日の高校が終わってから迎えに来てくれますか

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Will you come to me after high school that day

INTO JAPANESE

あの日、高校卒業後に私のところに来てくれませんか

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Will you come to me after high school that day