YOU SAID:

Will you update their nickname with the state they are representing please.

INTO JAPANESE

彼らが代表している州で彼らのニックネームを更新してくれませんか。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Will you update their nickname in the state they represent?

INTO JAPANESE

彼らが表す状態で彼らのニックネームを更新しますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Would you like to update their nickname as they represent?

INTO JAPANESE

彼らが表すように彼らのニックネームを更新しますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Would you like to update their nickname as they represent?