YOU SAID:

can someone come, and hear my prayer?

INTO JAPANESE

誰か来て私の祈りを聞いてくれませんか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Will someone come and hear my prayer?

INTO JAPANESE

誰かが来て私の祈りを聞いてくれるでしょうか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

Will someone come and hear my prayer?